No-Bullshit Website & Sales Page Copy Audits
Because if your site or sales page isn’t making your clients or customers click, download, subscribe, buy, or freak out over how “omg this is sooo me!” your copy makes them feel, something’s gotta change — and I want to help.
→ Tweaking your copy endlessly but still not feeling like it’s ready
→ Writing, deleting, rewriting, and backspacing yourself into a spiral
→ Wondering why your website isn't attracting the right people
→ Avoiding launching because you’re unsure if your sales page is strong enough & you don't want a flop
Your website isn't working, and you can't figure out what the problem is.
SO, YOU'VE BEEN...
sounds like you could use some help!
the copy critIQue
New-England-Level No-Bullshit in-depth website and sales page copy audits for DIYers who want to ensure their final drafts are perfect enough to
The Copy Critique Includes:
✓ A comprehensive audit of your website or sales page copy
✓ Edits + feedback to ensure clarity, engagement, and conversion potential
✓ A final proofread before you publish
✓ The option to add a 60-minute 1:1 session for real-time feedback & Q&A
BONUS: If you book a Copy Critique, you’ll also get my Copy Resource Guide to help you implement the changes!
✓ A comprehensive audit of your website or sales page copy
✓ Edits + feedback to ensure clarity, engagement, and conversion potential
✓ A final proofread before you publish
✓ The option to add a 60-minute 1:1 session for real-time feedback & Q&A
Draft Mode?
Currently Live?
CHOOSE ONE: IS YOUR SITE OR SALES PAGE IN....
or
I'll make edits in your doc. Here's how it works:
I'll record you an audit video. Here's how it works:
You’ll submit your website copy or sales page draft, and I’ll make my edits directly in the doc with, suggesting how you can improve your copy to maximize conversion.
Once my edits are done, you’ll implement the changes, and create your site or sales page, then send me the link for a final proofread before you publish the perfect version!
You’ll submit your website copy or sales page link, and I’ll record you a personalized Loom video going over the copy, line by line, suggesting changes and improvements.
Once you implement the changes, you’ll send it back to me and I’ll do one final proofread to make sure everything is juuuust right before you start promoting it!
AND NO MATTER WHICH OPTION YOU PICK:
You’ll have the option to add on a live 60-minute review session with me after the copy audit, to go over any questions you have!
Whether you’re curious about how to optimize your site for SEO, or you’re unsure how to implement the changes I've suggested, or you simply want an hour of my time to chat through website strategy, you can add on a 60-minute live session with me once you book your copy audit so we can chat face to face about whatever you need help with!
Erin loved her experience
“This copy audit gave me so much clarity and support to feel energized about the next steps for my website!”
“Our call was sooo helpful! I have been avoiding making website updates — felt kind of intimated by it tbh — but this gave me so much clarity and support to feel energized about the next steps for my website!”
— ERIN
Hi, I'm Sara— Website Copywriter, Marketing Mentor, & Copy Educator
And I promise to make your copy ✨ perfect. ✨
Or, at least, significantly better than it is right now… but only because “perfect” is actually subjective.
What I CAN tell you for sure, though, is that when I’m done editing or auditing your copy, you’ll feel 100% confident to show it off all over the Internet, it’ll be written for conversion, and your ideal clients and customers will love the shit out of it.
I can also tell you that I’m the most no-bullshit New Englander you’ll ever meet, so you can count on me for 100% honest, 100% strategic, 100% on-brand copy audits.
BOOK YOUR COPY AUDIT
$100K
0
90+
Pages of website copy written for my clients (and counting!)
Average revenue earned by my sales page clients per launch
Times I’ve held back on my honest opinion in copy feedback
Times I’ve edited a copy draft to make it at least 90x better
My credentials if you're curious
2,100+
“I finally feel confident in the words on my site and am forever impressed with how she was able to seamlessly infuse my personality into it all.”
—Steph
“Working with Sara was one of the best investments I've made for my business. If you're thinking of working with Sara, stop considering it and just do it - I promise you won't regret it!”
the copy critIQue
who
is for
The DIY-er
You wrote your own website or sales page and think it’s good, but you want a pro to make sure it actually IS good… so it, ya know, actually WORKS.
that's me
What’s Included With Every Copy Critique
✔️ Line-by-line feedback to improve clarity, messaging, and flow
✔️ A deep dive into what’s actually working (& why!) — and what isn’t
✔️ Conversion-focused tweaks to make sure your copy sells
✔️ An expert’s (heyyyy 👋) take on every word of your copy
✔️ Final proofread to make sure it’s polished before publishing
✔️ The confidence to hit "publish" knowing your copy is solid and sexy
✔️ Line-by-line feedback to improve clarity, messaging, and flow
✔️ A deep dive into what’s actually working (& why!) — and what isn’t
✔️ Conversion-focused tweaks to make sure your copy sells
✔️ An expert’s (heyyyy 👋) take on every word of your copy
✔️ Final proofread to make sure it’s polished before publishing
✔️ The confidence to hit "publish" knowing your copy is solid and sexy
and if you're wondering...
“Is it weird to like… book this before talking to you?”
Yes, that’s totally chill — if you like what you see on this page & you’re thinkin “yep ok sick this is exactly what I need” then you can absolutelyyyy directly book your copy audit via the button below, your onboarding materials will be automatically sent to you, and your audit will be completed within 10 business days (but probably sooner).
If you’d rather chat with me before booking it, that works, too! I want you to feel 100% comfortable before booking your copy audit. You can inquire below to book a free discovery call with me!
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This would have taken me 3 years to write on my own. HOW THE HELL DID YOU DO THAT?!
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❤️
✓ Want a copywriter to edit your website or sales page draft for you
✓ Would lo0o0ove an in-depth video review of your live website or sales page
✓ Can’t afford to (or don’t want to!) pay for an expert copywriter to write copy for you
✓ Feel partially confident about your DIY copy and wanna make sure it’s 100% perfection
✓ Aren’t sure whether you’re on the right track with your copy and need help getting there
ⓧ Haven’t written your website copy or sales page draft yet OR don’t have a live site or sales page for me to audit
ⓧ Hate DIYing and would rather just work with a copywriter to write it for you
ⓧ Don’t want in-depth, honest feedback on your copy bc you’re ~sensitive~ and will cry if I tell you to change your headline
ⓧ Would rather walk through writing your copy draft together (inquire here and tell me this; it’s something I offer on the DL!)
THE COPY CRITIQUE IS DEF RIGHT FOR YOU IF YOU:
THE COPY CRITIQUE ISN’T THE BEST FIT FOR YOU IF YOU:
book your copy critique ↓
Draft Mode?
Currently Live?
or
FOR SITES & SALES PAGES THAT AREN'T LIVE YET.
FOR SITES & SALES PAGES THAT ARE ALREADY UP.
✓ A comprehensive audit of your website or sales page copy
✓ Edits + feedback to ensure clarity, engagement, and
conversion potential
✓ A final proofread before you publish
✓ The option to add a 60-minute 1:1 session for real-time
feedback & Q&A
✓ BONUS! Access to my Copy Basics course to make
implementing the changes so much easier
✓ A comprehensive audit of your website or sales page copy
✓ Edits + feedback to ensure clarity, engagement, and
conversion potential
✓ A final proofread before you publish
✓ The option to add a 60-minute 1:1 session for real-time
feedback & Q&A
✓ BONUS! Access to my Copy Basics course to make
implementing the changes so much easier
frequently asked questions
That’s fine gurl. If your copy is actually mostly done, I’ll still make edits & I’ll give you my suggestions for how to finish it strong.
BUT if your site isn’t done yet and you want more in-depth help writing it, I have a website copywriting course AND a sales page copywriting course you could take first!
If your copy is still in a doc, go with the Doc Critique so I can edit directly in your doc. If your page is already live, the Link Critique (aka a recorded video audit) is your best bet.
Yep! If you book your Copy Critique and later realize you want to go over feedback in real-time, you can add a 1:1 review call later on. Just email me and ask for the discounted link (because my strategy calls typically cost $500, but my Copy Critique girlies get them for $300).
That’s literally why you’re here. Whether you’ve got a rough draft or a mostly-there version, I’ll help you refine it, clarify your messaging, and make sure it’s actually working.
YES! I will also happily audit email sequences up to 10 of your emails if you purchase the “doc” version of the audit. However, if you have something else you want me to review, you can send an email to sara@betweenthelinescopy.com with the subject line “copy audit question” to inquire.
Quick! Let’s fix your site or sales page copy up before you have time to overthink it again!
copy critique to the rescue!
You’ve already spent wayyyy too much time tweaking, second-guessing, and spiraling into Is this even good?! territory, so why wait another second? If you want to cut out the overthinking for good and actually get your copy ready to sell, this copy audit is for you.
So hand over your draft (or your live page), and I’ll make sure your copy is clear, compelling, and conversion-ready — so YOU can start seeing results.
Psst! Need help writing your copy in the first place? (Or something.) You'll definitely want to check this out.
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book your link audit
